After the Iceberg (Senryu)

all our broken dreams
screamed among the wreckage as
they abandoned ship


12 thoughts on “After the Iceberg (Senryu)”

  1. The image of dreams shattering and screaming along with the wrecking ship is such a powerful one. Great poetry from a great poet. But I can’t help wonder, if the ship was abandoned before or after the wreckage.

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      1. That is so touching. Can’t help get reminded of ‘Titanic’. I had cried watching the movie. Your poem.evokes similar sentiments.

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